Vykel Jump Planning + Keys

so i have been animating a jump for a character named Vykel, he is a viking with a very majestic nose. i started off doing a few rough drawings to get a feel for him and his shapes, then proceeded to do a few thumbnails and finding some reference pictures and videos.

and i have done my key animations.

this is my keys for my jump, i think this is good as it tells the story clearly, but i think the poses need to be clearer so that the jump looks nicer and more exaggerated. luckily this is just a rough so that if i decided to clean this up, i can do some changes to volumes, line thickness and the gestures, but in the timeframe i had i think that this is acceptable for my partner to inbetween.